- Title: Echoes of Chaos (Immortal Hearts Book One)
- Genre: Epic Fantasy
- Word count: 134k
- Content warnings: blood, violence, gore, animal harm, animal death, human death, sexual assault, threat of rape, torture, injury description, mention of slavery.
The gods fought chaos, and the gods lost.
Eryn is one of the kitari, hailed a peaceful race, but her fiery temper grows into an inferno when she’s forced to kill the woman she loves. Blaming the elders, she turns her anger against them and seeks forbidden knowledge. Yet, instead of finding what she needs to end their archaic ways, she becomes beholden to the whims of a being she can’t remember, except for their one demand: seek a prophecy.
Bridled by searing headaches and brutal nosebleeds, Eryn ventures into human lands and meets Arlan, a lord who claims to have the book she needs. But before she discovers if he speaks true, she’s attacked by a human mage and must flee.
The Mage Guild want something, and they will torture and kill to get it.
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